Please Review:: Lemon cleanse

[Oliva Lee]

Hi Friends
Please review my new site simplifast.com. Simplifast is natural energetic health drinks, It's contain 13% pure lemon juice, 11g per serving, Low Glycemic, Sweetened with Pure Organic Grade-B Maple Syrup and Highest Level of Antioxidants, Vitamins, and Minerals and important Electrolytes also. It Promotes Fast Weight-Loss and maintain Weight Management.

[kenjpet]

It's colorful to say the least. I like it. I would suggest an opening paragraph explaining the drink and benefits. I looked at your keyword list. The first two don't even appear on the page. I looked no further than that. Your main keywords should appear in the title, description and keywords. There should be no keywords listed that don't appear on the page. It is a good looking page but needs SEO work badly.

[prakask]

Well very nice website.But i would love it more if u could modify ur template a little bit like u have super imposed the strawberry over the template.U can also do that more on the page and modify that rectangle loook.Otherwise everything is nice.....

[forumpride]

You hit it right on the head! The site's usage of color gives you a strong call to action. It looks really, really good and the hard work shows. Listen if you have a great product but do not portray it in the right light what is the point? You are showing your product in a great light as well as using some great quality images. Great presentation and I am sure you have a great product as well so this looks like a win, win!